Portfolio Archive - Daniel Goldsmith Associates

Is that Clear?

By Zanne Gaynor, Kathryn Alevizos and Joe Butler

Beyond Lockdown Empire

By Joanne Clifton, Katya Jones and Sasha Latoya

The Rabbit who Wants to Fall Asleep

By Carl-Johan Forssén Ehrlin

The Little Elephant who Wants to Fall Asleep

By Carl-Johan Forssén Ehrlin

The Tractor who Wants to Fall Asleep

By Carl-Johan Forssén Ehrlin

National Cake Day in Ruritania

By Mark P. Henderson

Self-editing Fiction that Sells

By Lorena Goldsmith

Ben and the Book of Prophecies

By by Kirsty Riddiford

Boji

By by Robert Alan-Haven

michael graham

22:58 06 Jan 20

First rate review of my manuscript that provided helpful insights on both character and story development. It was important to me to have an outside professional critical eye look at my work in order to move beyond the trap of having a few reviews from friends that always tend to be supportive. I wanted an expert to be brutally frank as to whether the writing had potential in the marketplace. I commend Lorena for given me the comments needed to take my writing to the next level.

Brian Maudsley

18:26 04 Dec 19

As a new writer I had my non-fiction manuscript assessed several months ago and now have had it reassessed. The process has been straightforward and very rewarding as I have been given a great deal of valuable advice which has considerably improved the manuscript. There is no way that I would have been able to have done this by myself. In one word: invaluable.

Robert Burden

16:10 13 Jan 20

Many thanks for the perceptive reading of my manuscript. It's very encouraging to get such detailed and constructive feedback which will now enable me to get on with the revisions suggested. I shall take up your offer, if I may, to get back to you for what could be a final assessment before seeking publication. Once again, thanks for your invaluable assessment.

Zoe Crossfield

17:12 17 Feb 20

Miles' assessment of my manuscript was absolutely invaluable. His assessment was comprehensive and covered every aspect of my manuscript, from story to narrative, style, characterisation and marketability. Whilst being tailored to the manuscript I had submitted, Mile's suggested amendments and advice were transferable to future work and framed positively. Daniel Goldsmith's service was worth every penny and I would not think twice about recommending them to someone who is looking for a professional and detailed assessment of their work.

Maryna Smahina

10:25 25 Nov 19

The feedback Lorena Goldsmith gave me on my manuscript couldn't be more helpful. She did a great job, and the report I got is very well structured and detailed. There are often things in my writing that I can feel don’t work quite right, but I can’t put my finger on what exactly is failing and how I could make it better. Lorena helped me with that a lot - literally, every word she has written resonated with me. I surely will use the feedback in my revision process! Lorena also pointed out the good parts of my manuscript, which was very reassuring for me! The feedback I've got was the very thing I needed to continue the work on my book with renewed motivation and energy and make it the best piece of work I can.

Fault Lines

Is that Clear?

Kololo Hill

Hidden in Plain Sight

Beyond Lockdown Empire

The Rabbit who Wants to Fall Asleep

The Little Elephant who Wants to Fall Asleep

The Tractor who Wants to Fall Asleep

Before I Say I Do

Nothing Ventured

Create Your Future

For the Love of Lilli

The Assassins

The Berlin Defence

Rainbirds

The Death of Baseball

The Conviction of Cora Burns

The Colours of the Dance

National Parks

National Cake Day in Ruritania

Generations of Love

Little Max Parker

The Accidental Warrior

The Essence of Grace

Dress Code: Red

Harm

Chinese Whispers

Lost the Plot

Payback

Buyout

Self-editing Fiction that Sells

Eeny Meeny Miny Moe

Touched by Angels

Chasing Innocence

When Whispers Cry

A Means of Escape

Weeds don’t Perish

Arthur’s Young Warriors

Ben and the Book of Prophecies

Boji